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Alice

"There was nothing so very remarkable in that; nor did Alice think it so very much out of the ordinary to hear the Rabbit say to itself 'Oh dear! Oh dear! I shall be too late!' ...but when the Rabbit actually took a watch out its waistcoat pocket, and looked at it, and then hurried on, Alice startled to her feet."

Akryl, akvareller och bläckpenna. Färgerna är lite förstärkta i paint shop eftersom min kamera åt dem alla. Texten är (duh) också tillsatt med paintshop.



Paint shop professional.
Can't even see the world straight, can you?

I like the swirlyness you've done in the background of the painting. The rabbit is also adorable.



For the constructive part, I'd say the following. All in all the composition of the work is good, but it looks like you've been in a bit of a hurry to get it done, somehow. Practice the details and the shadows because those two together make the painting more interesting to watch.

SVAR: I don't think the composition is very good, either, but thanks. I've used mixed media, and very little pen (Alice's eyes are ink.) so the details I'd like are difficult to put in with a clumsy brush.